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    dots Submission Name: One by Onedots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 44
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotsOne by Onedots

    My friends,
    They abandon me.
    My family,
    They ignore me.
    Whether it be all at once,
    Or gradually overtime.
    One by One.
    They all leave me.
    One by One.
    They learn to hate me.
    One by One.
    I lose them all one...

    Submitted on 2013-11-10 00:03:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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