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    dots Submission Name: Someone Out Theredots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 368
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       I had a little inspiration from a picture.


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    dotsSomeone Out Theredots
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    She screams
    To soften the pain
    Then lets her tears
    Fall down like rain
    She feels used
    Broken
    And bent
    Remembering all of the words
    That he never meant
    She lays awake at night
    Just to wonder why
    Then she slowly
    Crosses her heart
    And hopes to die...
    She awakes in the morning
    With the warmth of the sun
    Still feeling a little used
    A little broken
    And a little bent
    But then she realizes
    There is someone out there
    That means all of the words
    That he never meant...




    Submitted on 2013-11-10 15:51:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2013-11-10 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
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