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    dots Submission Name: No Limitsdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsNo Limitsdots
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    I have an invisible illness
    Its not something you can see
    There is no getting rid of it
    For it is part of me.

    Don't treat me like I'm glass
    I'm stronger than you'd know
    I've been there, I'm done with that
    The world I will show.

    Don't set limitations on me
    I CAN do it, when I try
    Just step back, let me go
    You'll see, I'll touch the sky.




    Submitted on 2013-11-10 20:49:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      That is amazing
    | Posted on 2013-11-12 00:00:00 | by Obscura | [ Reply to This ]
      This is fantastic! Hallmark card, DOOOO ITTTT. I really feel the positiveness, you definitely CAN scale these walls.
    | Posted on 2013-11-10 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]
      You bring a lot of positive energy with this one. That's always refreshing. Might be something worth referring to before attempting your future writes to help motivate you.
    | Posted on 2013-11-10 00:00:00 | by Passionbyapathy | [ Reply to This ]


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