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    dots Submission Name: A Wolfdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsA Wolfdots

    Last night i was attacked.
    Attacked in my sleep.
    A wolf..
    She wanted me dead.
    She chained me to walls,
    And scared me with some help.
    A wolf..
    Was trying to prevent.
    Prevent me from escaping,
    From escaping the darkness.
    A wolf..
    Killed me.
    Killed me in my sleep.
    Sleep is all i have left.
    All because of..
    A wolf..

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