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    dots Submission Name: Please End Medots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 83
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsPlease End Medots
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    I have had,
    Broken bones.
    Aching muscles.
    Needles pierced through my body.
    Cuts.
    Bruises.
    And yet...
    None of that,
    None of it.
    Hurts as bad as this does.
    Stings as bad as this does.
    Causes as much pain as this does.
    And i can't stop it..
    I can't do anything to prevent it.
    To even numb it,
    Is impossible.
    IT DOESN'T STOP.
    IT NEVER ENDS.
    And.....
    It can't..
    It just can't..
    So..
    I ask somebody..
    Anybody..
    Please...
    Please...
    Just end me..





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