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    dots Submission Name: Calenderdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 569
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 492



    Description:
       Another attempt at a topic "Calenders"


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    dotsCalenderdots
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    I'mma smash you down, and make you flat
    Don't really care, what you think of that.

    Keep on pressing, until you shine
    Cause you're gonna be, a work of mine

    Look at that! Your glossy sheen.
    I know you might think that I'm mean.

    But look at you now, you're the best.
    Sit over there with all the rest.

    Top of the stack, that's where you go.
    My next project is down below.




    Submitted on 2013-11-11 16:23:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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