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    dots Submission Name: Daggersdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 116
    Class/Type: Poetry/Betrayal
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    Sharp gleaming metal.
    Sticking straight out,
    Out of my back.
    How many are there?
    I'm not quite sure.
    Alls I know is,
    No one has seen my back.
    Not in a long long time.
    Silver is stained with red,
    Red blood.
    Poured over these blades.
    These daggers.
    It seems like my back keeps making room though.
    Room for more people to stab me in the back.
    To lie and cheat me.
    Just so they can be happy.
    That's fine by me.
    These daggers...
    Are the closest thing to friends i've ever had.
    They will never leave me.
    They will never betray me.
    Even if they force more and more pain.
    These are mine now..
    My daggers.

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