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    dots Submission Name: Too Angrydots
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    Author: nolram
    ASL Info:    29/M
    Elite Ratio:    3.66 - 58/61/33
    Words: 263
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsToo Angrydots
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    My writings are too angry
    Doesn't help that I listen to the Misfits when I feel happy
    Once I'm sad, I get violent with passionate apathy
    I never hit anyone or physically harmed anyone
    But I did punch holes in the wall
    and shattered a couple of windshields
    in my youth
    I sing, I paint and I write as an outlet
    Creativity sustains my life
    But sometimes I am so angry I can't finish what I am working on
    most of the time actually
    like the last thing I posted here
    yeah
    I'm like that
    what you see is what you get
    And when I see someone that seems to be the answer to my loneliness and they laugh louder at all my jokes for two days where time seemed to stand still I'm gonna notice when all of a sudden they are making jokes at my expense with someone else

    someone who previously seemed neutral and non threatening

    You may think I'm dumb

    she's not the only one

    she may say calm the fuck down, we aren't anything anyway

    but I'm gonna say one of these days all this wrath is gonna get expressed on this or some similar character's face

    You obviously don't know me if you think I'm joking or if you think I wouldn't take it there

    It is about you. It is about him. And it is about my perpetual inability to remain cool and talk things out

    And my emerging refusal to bottle emotions up any longer




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    ||| Comments |||
      You may well wind up in jail fella. Perhaps not the best reason to contain yourself but it's gotta be in the top five. Right up there with she's gonna get pissed, not approve. And he may be a karate master who can kick your ass. etc. etc. Just saying!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-11-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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