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Submission Name:
Raise up
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Author:
Katlord
ASL Info:
24/no thanks/my room
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2.17 - 375/199/101
Words:
55
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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Raise up
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My heart is going sing and my soul is gonna dance
I'm praising God for giving me this chance.
To prove to myself, once and for all
I can get back up no matter the fall.
This world can't keep me down, doncha see?
I'm gonna raise up, and I will be free.
Submitted on 2013-11-13 16:21:24
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Man i wish i had that strength.
| Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by
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Man i wish i had that strength.
| Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by
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Amen brethren
| Posted on 2013-11-13 00:00:00 | by
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