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Submission Name: Raise up dots

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Author:	Katlord
ASL Info:	24/no thanks/my room
Elite Ratio:	2.17 - 375/199/101
Words:	55

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
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Raise up dots

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My heart is going sing and my soul is gonna dance
I'm praising God for giving me this chance.

To prove to myself, once and for all
I can get back up no matter the fall.

This world can't keep me down, doncha see?
I'm gonna raise up, and I will be free.

Submitted on 2013-11-13 16:21:24 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  Man i wish i had that strength.
| Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]
  Man i wish i had that strength.
| Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]
  Amen brethren
| Posted on 2013-11-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.