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    dots Submission Name: Raise updots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRaise updots
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    My heart is going sing and my soul is gonna dance
    I'm praising God for giving me this chance.

    To prove to myself, once and for all
    I can get back up no matter the fall.

    This world can't keep me down, doncha see?
    I'm gonna raise up, and I will be free.




    Submitted on 2013-11-13 16:21:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Man i wish i had that strength.
    | Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]
      Man i wish i had that strength.
    | Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]
      Amen brethren
    | Posted on 2013-11-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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