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Raise up


Author: Katlord
ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375 /199 /101
Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Raise up


My heart is going sing and my soul is gonna dance
I'm praising God for giving me this chance.

To prove to myself, once and for all
I can get back up no matter the fall.

This world can't keep me down, doncha see?
I'm gonna raise up, and I will be free.




Submitted on 2013-11-13 16:21:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Man i wish i had that strength.
| Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]
  Man i wish i had that strength.
| Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by ForgottenGraves | [ Reply to This ]
  Amen brethren
| Posted on 2013-11-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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