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Sleepless Nights

Author: TheSnoitart
ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53 /64 /52
Words: 161
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Sleepless Nights

Sleepless nights and fallen faces
Watching the sun rise in all the wrong places
I try to think of someone, with no one in mind
Lost in the mazes, my nerves begin to grind

I slip and stumble through this world
I crash on broken wings unfurled
Taking flight's just not for me
but I'm done taking shit from destiny

I'll do as I please, and fuck the rest
They'll hate me whether I'm cursed or blessed
So I might as well just do it for me
whether or not they'll ever see

Losing myself in smoke and laughter
Nobody ever lives happily after
They'll take my life, my heart, my soul
and leave my innards black as coal

But I'll leave my mark, before I'm gone
I think to myself as I watch the dawn
They couldn't hurt me even if they tried
I'm the only one who ever could, but I already
died inside.

Submitted on 2013-11-15 07:08:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Why does it seem that you feel as if the whole world is against you and has turned its back on you? It hasn't.
| Posted on 2013-11-16 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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