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    dots Submission Name: Sleepless Nightsdots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSleepless Nightsdots
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    Sleepless nights and fallen faces
    Watching the sun rise in all the wrong places
    I try to think of someone, with no one in mind
    Lost in the mazes, my nerves begin to grind

    I slip and stumble through this world
    I crash on broken wings unfurled
    Taking flight's just not for me
    but I'm done taking shit from destiny

    I'll do as I please, and fuck the rest
    They'll hate me whether I'm cursed or blessed
    So I might as well just do it for me
    whether or not they'll ever see

    Losing myself in smoke and laughter
    Nobody ever lives happily after
    They'll take my life, my heart, my soul
    and leave my innards black as coal

    But I'll leave my mark, before I'm gone
    I think to myself as I watch the dawn
    They couldn't hurt me even if they tried
    I'm the only one who ever could, but I already
    died inside.




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      Why does it seem that you feel as if the whole world is against you and has turned its back on you? It hasn't.
    | Posted on 2013-11-16 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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