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    dots Submission Name: Musicalitydots
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    Author: TheSnoitart
    ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53/64/52
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMusicalitydots
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    The soundtrack in my head
    going on repeat, repeat, repeat
    a jaunty little tune
    jarring, disarming, unkind
    it sounds to me like a melody
    of days gone by and sugarsweet riots
    of loneliness and losing bets
    of video games and shaved heads.

    The music of my life
    why won't it repeat, repeat, repeat
    so I can see those faces again
    friendly, family, so lonely
    So I can see the times, they are a' changin'
    and maybe learn to change with them.
    But we all know I'm too stubborn
    for that.




    Submitted on 2013-11-15 08:41:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think everyone can relate to this. And if by chance they can't then they need to get a life.
    | Posted on 2013-11-15 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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