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    dots Submission Name: Gravity Fallsdots

    Author: Uzair
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/1/8
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Dark
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    dotsGravity Fallsdots

    I was wondering if my pictures clear
    in heaven I see stairs
    visions impaired, living in fear
    Dark halls cancels light.

    Footsteps I wonder what might happened if they'll aproach me.
    Silently moving swiftly through avenues of depression.
    Maybe it wasn't heaven in disguise,
    it was all lies, let me sleep so these dark hours can pass by.

    As I sleep it follows me into a trans
    seeing nocturnal images,
    aggressively sucking my life away.

    Resiting things,
    not even of tongues but of possession
    my opression is my basic fear
    a player and contestant.

    Gravity Falls,
    Gravity Falls
    Paintings of disasters
    Maid Dolls, following eyes, Creepiness,
    Gravity Falls.

    A war within myself is like mental intoxication
    I can't think right can someone fly apon me,
    So I can even contest with such a spiritual fight
    but let me not say things because insight
    another demon might just take away what I think is righteous,
    Gravity Falls

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