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Sight of my Blood

Author: ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:    20, Male
Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135
Words: 97
Class/Type: Poetry /Cutting or Mutilation
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I know it's complete shit but its the truth soooooo yeah

Sight of my Blood

I keep banging,
I keep screaming.
Every time I hit my head.

It may hurt,
It may sting.
But there is no stopping me.

You see me laughing,
When i'm bleeding.
And yet you don't question it.

You know me,
You've seen me.
Enjoying every drop hitting.

Ah my floor..
It is stained..
But I love the sight of red.

Oh just maybe.
I will lose enough blood one day.

But for now,
Yes just for now.
I will keep laughing when i bleed.

Submitted on 2013-11-15 22:31:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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