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    dots Submission Name: Sight of my Blooddots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.41 - 5/110/127
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
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       I know it's complete shit but its the truth soooooo yeah


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    dotsSight of my Blooddots
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    I keep banging,
    I keep screaming.
    Every time I hit my head.


    It may hurt,
    It may sting.
    But there is no stopping me.


    You see me laughing,
    When i'm bleeding.
    And yet you don't question it.


    You know me,
    You've seen me.
    Enjoying every drop hitting.


    Ah my floor..
    It is stained..
    But I love the sight of red.

    Maybe,
    Oh just maybe.
    I will lose enough blood one day.

    But for now,
    Yes just for now.
    I will keep laughing when i bleed.





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