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    dots Submission Name: Forgetdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 439
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    Bytes: 710



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    dotsForgetdots
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    If only I were the Demon
    The one with the power
    I'd make you forget
    Go through your memories
    Back to that night
    I'd make you believe
    That we never met
    Oh how I wish
    I could make you forget
    Please believe me
    When I say he lies
    The only time he will ever be happy
    Is when he kills his host body
    And his host body dies
    He's a Demon
    Don't listen
    His words?
    They're all lies
    He wants you broken at least
    Dead at the most
    If I had the power
    I would make you forget
    You'd still be happy
    And I wouldn't have met you yet...




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