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    dots Submission Name: This isn't goodbyedots

    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThis isn't goodbyedots

    When I go to bed with my teddy tight by my side,
    I'm overwhelmed with these emotions that I try to hide.
    I think of you and I in the moments when we're just doing what we do,
    I think of me and the moments that I love and appreciate you.
    Tomorrow will come and reality will remind me we're still apart,
    That's when I'll wish you were more accessible and not just in my heart.

    Baby believe me when I say,you're all that I want and more,
    You've become a part of my life that I've never wanted before.
    Bits and pieces of me are slowly peeling away,
    And all I can think of is this one particular day.
    After you've done all you have set out to do,
    I can't wait for it to,once again,be just me and you.

    No,this isn't a sonnet,symphony or a Chinese haiku.
    This is me saying that my heart will always belong to you.

    Submitted on 2013-11-16 13:05:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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