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    dots Submission Name: Where I Belongdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       New style i wanted to test with this subject.

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    dotsWhere I Belongdots

    Nobody can see,
    See the truth,
    Truth that my body hides,
    Hides in this darkness,
    Darkness hides the reality,
    Reality behind everything,
    Everything that has gone dark,
    Dark inside me and you,
    You want to see the truth?
    Truth is evading,
    Evading everyone but I,
    I see the truth underneath,
    Underneath the aura,
    Aura that shrouds,
    Shrouds the wings,
    Wings that allow,
    Allow me to fly through hell,
    Hell is my home,
    Home that i have accepted,
    Accepted to pain,
    Pain that won't stop,
    Stop is a word that i have forgotten,
    Forgotten what happiness is,
    Is life even worth it?
    It raise me up,
    Up and then straight down,
    Down back to,
    To hell where i belong.

    Submitted on 2013-11-16 13:07:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      It can seriously be depressing sometimes being human. Believe me I empathize with you, the forth horseman this prospectus kind of does to me on the darkness. I relate optimism can be hard to come by given that the albeit somewhat immature nature of my imagination is all I truly have with which to confront the situation. I mean friends can be fun but enigma entity, although a treacherous tirade, seems to be the key. The more together we are at being this does of in too us, the more we have to give………yes, no?? Its no wonder we're possessive with this part of our identity crisis. When I stand next to the person standing next to me I want this to be a good thing for them, not a battle I'm carrying on right through them. Unfortunately, given the even nowness of meanwhile back at the ranch this is a hard thing to get out of. Seriously, be happy, you are not alone. Go listen to "Hells Bells" or "Highway to Hell" by AC/DC, great fodder.

    | Posted on 2013-11-16 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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