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    dots Submission Name: ~Sigh~dots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 426
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    dots~Sigh~dots
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    I could tell you, a thousand times, exactly how I feel.
    But I know, deep my heart, you won't believe its real.




    Submitted on 2013-11-16 16:25:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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