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    dots Submission Name: November 16, 2013dots
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    Author: wonderlandgirl
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    Words: 82
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/The pain inside
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    dotsNovember 16, 2013dots
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    Why do I feel feel this pain? Why do I care anyway? He doesn't like me. Its a one-sided thing. People make fun of me for liking him anyway. They are supposed to be my friends and yet they do this to me. They laugh and make jokes. Like it's all fun and games. But it really hurts me when they laugh and say "He doesn't like you that way." I'm just done with what they say, it's not their life anyway.




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