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    dots Submission Name: One and Onlydots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsOne and Onlydots

    When i see you,
    My legs get weak.
    When i hear your voice,
    My body gets chills.
    When i feel your touch,
    My body is paralyzed.
    Your love,
    Is my weakness.
    My heart is your toy.
    To play with,
    To bend and twist,
    To tear and break.
    And yet i keep coming back.
    Coming back for more.
    Why do i torture myself?
    Well you are..
    My one and only love forever..
    You can tell me over and over,
    Give up,
    It'll never happen,
    But I wont listen.
    I can't...
    I don't break promises.

    Submitted on 2013-11-16 18:38:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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