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    dots Submission Name: Dreams of the Impossibledots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.45 - 5/115/131
    Words: 119
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsDreams of the Impossibledots
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    You're insane.
    It'll never work.
    Nothing you can do.
    Give up.
    That's all i hear now...
    The words that are told,
    Told to me when i tell them my dreams.
    Why?
    Cause i dream for the impossible,
    Hoping that maybe it'll happen.
    We all hope for that,
    The impossible to happen.
    But most give up,
    Give up when they grow older.
    Develop dreams that are possible.
    Forgetting their dreams,
    Never coming back to them.
    But i am one of the few,
    The few that keeps on fighting,
    Fighting for what they want.
    And who knows,
    The impossible becomes possible all the time now.
    Maybe this can to,
    That's why i fight.
    That's why i..
    Dream..
    Dreams of the Impossible.




    Submitted on 2013-11-16 21:34:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like the passion, the fervor of this. I can feel the effort, the push, to not give up. Thanks for writing this.
    | Posted on 2014-05-03 00:00:00 | by mimis043 | [ Reply to This ]


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