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Submission Name:
Land
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Author:
Uzair
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0.7 - 0/1/8
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37
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Land
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When I came through
horizons,
laughing at the sun.
The clouds fall,
The stars show,
Heaven just begun.
No more hate,
No more pain,
Just humans claiming reign,
And waterfalls purifying souls.
Submitted on 2013-11-17 12:15:19
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