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    Author: Uzair
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    Words: 37
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    When I came through
    horizons,
    laughing at the sun.

    The clouds fall,
    The stars show,
    Heaven just begun.

    No more hate,
    No more pain,
    Just humans claiming reign,
    And waterfalls purifying souls.




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