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Submission Name: Land dots

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Author:	Uzair
Elite Ratio:	0.7 - 0/1/8
Words:	37

Class/Type:	Poetry/
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Land

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When I came through
horizons,
laughing at the sun.

The clouds fall,
The stars show,
Heaven just begun.

No more hate,
No more pain,
Just humans claiming reign,
And waterfalls purifying souls.

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