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    dots Submission Name: Believedots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    dotsBelievedots
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    Yes, you can do it, believe it is true.
    No matter the problem, you can pull through.

    Rid yourself of worry and doubt.
    Give it to God, He'll sort it all out.

    Let Him glad you, by the light of his hand
    And remember somethings you won't understand.

    Breathe and trust, He knows what He's doing.
    Through trials, your faith, He is slowly renewing.

    Stay strong in the Lord, when the world seems insane.
    May not seem like it now, but He can heal all pain.

    So never give up, and watch where your going,
    God is beside you, the way, He is showing.




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