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Invisible Man

Author: TheSnoitart
ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53 /64 /52
Words: 162
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Invisible Man

I'm the invisible man
the power's in my hands
to not be seen
stay out of sight
hidden behind an endless night.

The invisible man you may soon see
is fighting a war with destiny
they yell and scream
but no one hears
this silent war is beyond the years.

The invisible man sits in his chair
surrounded by the lonely air
he's got no one
he's near his end
'cause destiny refuses to bend.

The invisible man and destiny
can't get along, they can't agree
she hurt him bad
and now he's confused
wondering if all this time, he's been used.

So now we see the invisible man
destiny's mad because he ran
she's got no right
no claim on him
he's no longer subject to her whim.

Now this man and I are one
our freedom now has just begun
destiny can't have us
we'll fight this war
since loving her is such a chore.

Submitted on 2013-11-18 20:44:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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