The Riddle

Author: TheSnoitart ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53 /64 /52 Words: 81

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The Riddle

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Two lights dance on hollow graves a box, a trinket, wooden staves a hammer blow, a bloody fist now how has it come down to this? You cleave my pyrite heart in two the box is left without a clue the lights decide it's time to die the bloody fist raises to the sky. I spy a riddle, long and thick the answer may be kind of sick inside the trinket, a memory can't you tell we'll never see?

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