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The Riddle

Author: TheSnoitart
ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53 /64 /52
Words: 81
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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The Riddle

Two lights dance on hollow graves
a box, a trinket, wooden staves
a hammer blow, a bloody fist
now how has it come down to this?

You cleave my pyrite heart in two
the box is left without a clue
the lights decide it's time to die
the bloody fist raises to the sky.

I spy a riddle, long and thick
the answer may be kind of sick
inside the trinket, a memory
can't you tell we'll never see?

Submitted on 2013-11-19 01:17:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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