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    dots Submission Name: Truth dots

    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsTruth dots

    Your voice, it kills me to hear it.
    I know the truth, its in your spirit.

    These boys will love, till the end of time.
    But to you, that ain't worth a dime.

    If it ain't money in your pocket,
    You have no place to lock it

    No heart to store the memories
    Just emptiness and illfeelings.

    I try to brush my thoughts aside,
    But the truth, it hurts, it doesn't hide.

    Submitted on 2013-11-20 09:58:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Although I enjoy having ample money, I guess I'm just one of the boys. More spiritual than materialistic. I hurt too. There are many women that are materialistic also, each one a separate pain. ouch……..I need a bandade………thanks…….it hurts so good!

    | Posted on 2013-11-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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