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Everything surprises me, be it a text, a hug, or kiss.
When you are sitting next to me, my world is in bliss.
I don't always see it as true, I stare, I can't believe
That someone, as great as you, would spend time with me.
Submitted on 2013-11-20 10:27:36
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I can relate to this. It's simple, but still good. I agree with Bruce about he thinks you're great too. But this is how you feel and you have a right to express that. All I can say is, enjoy what you have. Don't doubt that you deserve the attention.
| Posted on 2013-11-22 00:00:00 | by
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Enough of this self-deprecation, he probably thinks your great too.
| Posted on 2013-11-20 00:00:00 | by
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