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    dots Submission Name: Admiredots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsAdmiredots
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    Everything surprises me, be it a text, a hug, or kiss.
    When you are sitting next to me, my world is in bliss.

    I don't always see it as true, I stare, I can't believe
    That someone, as great as you, would spend time with me.




    Submitted on 2013-11-20 10:27:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can relate to this. It's simple, but still good. I agree with Bruce about he thinks you're great too. But this is how you feel and you have a right to express that. All I can say is, enjoy what you have. Don't doubt that you deserve the attention.
    | Posted on 2013-11-22 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]
      Enough of this self-deprecation, he probably thinks your great too.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-11-20 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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