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    dots Submission Name: Child In Medots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/65/84
    Words: 270
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsChild In Medots
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    Child come here
    I can see the fear
    In the tears that fill your eyes
    The harm they caused
    Was hidden because
    The facts were taken as lies
    No one believed
    Though pain was seethed
    But still they turned away
    You soon gave in
    And let them win
    Your body defiled everyday
    Nobody cared
    No one was there
    To save you from the pain
    You stayed silent
    Through all the violence
    As your tears fell down like rain
    How could they deny
    The tears you cried
    Were not fake or for show
    Then series of lies
    And attention cries
    Still couldn't make them know
    Were you being bad
    And supposed to be sad
    Did you make them hate you
    What could you have done
    When they already won
    You were young and had no clue
    As time passed by
    The more you cried
    And gave yourself away
    Sometimes you fear
    That danger is near
    Even to this very day
    But you are safe
    Here in this place
    Where you are dearly loved
    A man who respects you
    And never forgets to
    Is what you were dreaming of
    He'll hold you tight
    Keep you safe at night
    No need for suicide
    The way he loves
    Is special because
    You no longer have to hide
    Child come here
    There's no need to fear
    Though tears still fill your eyes
    Just remember you're home
    And you're never alone
    Now somebody hears your cries
    The pain is released
    Though may never be ceased
    In time you will get through
    This life is a test
    Now I must confess
    Child in me I am you




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