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    dots Submission Name: Love Through Him dots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 302
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    When the whole world glares
    You stare into my eyes
    All they see is part of me
    But you hear my broken cries

    When I feel like fading away
    You remind me that I am loved
    Loved not just by you alone
    But by the Lord in heaven above

    He loves us both very much
    And when it seems no one else does
    Our love shines because of Him
    He's with us now and always was

    True love made by love Himself
    No one can ever tear it apart
    God gave us more than we wanted
    For true love dwells in our hearts

    How can this love be broken
    When He says that it cannot
    What judgement matters but His
    When by His blood we were bought

    Not one man or two can break us
    Nor three nor four nor five
    No not even one thousand
    For true love is He who is alive

    Our God, our Lord Jesus
    Who's love is limitless
    We do not deserve His love
    And that I will confess

    But God loves us enough to save
    Our souls by giving His son
    To die and pay for our sins
    A battle that has been won

    When you mention Jesus' love
    Sometimes it makes me cry
    Why would He suffer for us
    For sinners He did die

    But then He rose from the grave
    Death had been defeated
    Which only proves His truth
    True love can not be cheated

    So before I become overwhelmed
    By people I do not know
    I think of your love for me
    And how by God it's shown

    That being said a point is made
    Our love will never fade away
    Because Jesus lives in our hearts
    We're His forever and always




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