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    dots Submission Name: A Furry Thingdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 173
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsA Furry Thingdots
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    What's the worry, silly furry, life is blurry, better hurry!

    Down the hill and through the woods, finding all them not-so-goods.

    But look, oh my, a bear is there! A bear? A bear! A bear that cares.

    His face so sweet and heart is kind, so leave your saddened past behind.

    No need to fear, no need to fight, for he will keep you safe at night.

    One misunderstood caring bear met a tiger who was in major despair.

    But nevermore will she be sad for she has met the perfect lad.

    To hold her when she wants to hide, to fill that empty space inside.

    A bear, one bear, that bear, he loves, one silly tiger who no one else does.

    How can it be she's loved at last, her loneliness gone, her heart healing fast.

    One bear, that bear, this bear saved me. The tiger is I and in love are we.




    Submitted on 2013-11-21 21:23:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2013-12-03 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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