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    dots Submission Name: Broken Heartdots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBroken Heartdots
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    My chains are broken by His grace
    But still I hold on tight
    To things I should let go of
    Why do I choose this fight

    Even when I'm in your light, Lord
    I try so hard to hide
    Why do I want to run away
    Why do I push you aside

    Drowning in my anger
    Burning in my pain
    Misery consumes my soul
    As I'm falling down again
    God why do you still want me
    When I choose to fall apart
    And how can you still love me
    When I won't let you fix my broken heart

    Days pass by and I don't listen
    I won't even mention your name
    But then my heart cries out to you
    When I need your help again
    Why don't I just listen
    Lord when will I just listen

    Drowning in my anger
    Burning in my pain
    Misery consumes my soul
    As I'm falling down again
    God why do you still want me
    When I choose to fall apart
    And how can you still love me
    When I won't let you fix my broken heart

    For all the blessings you give
    And all the love you have for me
    How can you still forgive
    When I refuse to see
    Lord when will I just listen
    Will I ever learn to listen

    Drowning in my anger
    Burning in my pain
    Misery consumes my soul
    As I'm falling down again
    God why do you still want me
    When I choose to fall apart
    And how can you still love me
    When I won't let you fix my broken heart

    When will I just listen
    Lord when will I learn to listen
    All I have to do is listen
    Lord I'm going to choose to listen

    Save me from my anger
    Ease all of my pain
    Free my soul from misery
    And pick me up again
    I know why you still want me
    There's no need to fall apart
    And I know you'll always love me
    So Jesus will you fix my broken heart
    Oh Jesus please just fix my broken heart




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