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    dots Submission Name: Only Within Medots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsOnly Within Medots

    Only Within Me,
    Can one know the reasoning.
    Can one know why i do the things i do.
    Can one know why i think these thoughts.
    Only Within Me,
    Can one know my hate.
    Can one know my anger.
    Can one know my sadness.
    Only Within Me,
    Can one see the true me.
    Can one see the demon.
    Can one see my true form.
    Only Within Me,
    Can one feel my pain.
    Can one feel my sorrow.
    Can one feel my soul.
    Only Within Me,
    Can one learn what I am.
    Can one learn what got me here.
    Can one find the real me...

    Submitted on 2013-11-21 22:29:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I understand and know you...
    | Posted on 2013-11-22 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a great poem. I feel like I can relate to it a lot. Seems to me that it goes a lot deeper than the lines you've written. Each one is just one part of you. Nobody else will ever know exactly how you feel. Nice job, the message is clear.
    | Posted on 2013-11-22 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]

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