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    dots Submission Name: This Lifedots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsThis Lifedots

    Help is hard to come by,
    I know that for sure.
    But i will always try,
    To help you through it,
    Even if i can't help,
    Maybe i can take the pain.
    Make it my own,
    Take it all away,
    For me to shoulder alone.
    That's all i want now,
    Your happiness is all that matters,
    If i can help in that process then..
    Then i have succeeded,
    In this life.

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