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    dots Submission Name: Irremovable Armordots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/133
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
    Total Views: 526
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       I know its not very good, but it came to my head soooooooo yeah..


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    dotsIrremovable Armordots
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    After you are hurt,
    Your guard is up.
    You don't want to get hurt,
    Not again..
    So,
    To protect yourself,
    You add a piece,
    A piece of armor.
    And piece by piece,
    You make up your suit,
    Your suit of protection.
    To fight off those who hurt you,
    But what happens,
    When your armor is penetrated?
    The unthinkable happens,
    Your protection wasn't strong enough..
    You realize something...
    You never were strong enough,
    You are to weak,
    And there's...
    Nothing you can do,
    But endure it,
    Bleed a little more,
    And let it pour through,
    Your irremovable armor..




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