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    dots Submission Name: Finding Strengthdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsFinding Strengthdots
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    Some people find it,
    Some people don't.
    Have i found mine?
    I don't know.
    My head says yes,
    My heart says no.
    My body says yes,
    My soul says no.
    What do i listen to?
    Are they right?
    Who knows...
    I just know,
    That i feel weak,
    That i feel broken.
    You're the only one that believes,
    Believes that there's strength,
    Underneath my skin,
    Inside my body,
    Deep in my soul,
    It is you and only you,
    Who is finding strength,
    Inside of me...




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      Sentience leads to imagination and although this often seems like immaturity of in it's identities strength. Situation can seem insurmountable but dreams are a cognitive force, they give us hope, if only for personable expression. What is soul, is it dreams of life after death or a cogitable sense of the integrity in corporeally preternatural? Although I might be the first to admit that ethereally sublime may be beyond our capacity as humans perhaps the metaphysical mystique of mystic symbiosis is a rational relativity. Relative rationality is its own reward, enjoy yourself!!!!!!!!!!

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2013-11-23 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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