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    dots Submission Name: My True Familydots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.47 - 5/117/132
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 481
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    Bytes: 650



    Description:
       Some freeverse, sorry if it's bad


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    dotsMy True Familydots
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    Who am I?
    A human lost in a dark world,
    Or a spawn of darkness,
    Living in the mortal world.
    Maybe even a lost soul,
    Wandering the Earth..
    That's not what they say..
    They say..
    I am family.
    I am,
    One of them.
    Only time will tell,
    For sure who i am,
    But for now..
    I trust you,
    All of you in my new family.
    I am glad to join,
    For darkness has smiled upon all of us,
    Given us each strength..
    It's gonna take some getting used to..
    But this is who i trust now..
    This is now..
    My true family.




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