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    dots Submission Name: Forgottendots
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    Author: Blizzard
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    Words: 22
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsForgottendots
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    I am forgotten and I have forgotten
    who I was and who I am.
    I'm just some foot prints in the sand...




    Submitted on 2013-11-26 16:56:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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