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    dots Submission Name: Mascaradots
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    Author: Joybell
    ASL Info:    22/F/MO
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 101/94/56
    Words: 258
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMascaradots
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    She still has mascara smears.

    She still has to remember where she left her keys when she wants to leave the house.
    She still sleeps with her hair bands on her wrist
    She leaves her socks on the floor and when she brushes her teeth, sometimes she smears the paste on her cheek.

    She isn’t a perfect woman that you imagine he must now be with; he is still just with a woman.
    Don’t think all of you is wrong, because it didn’t captivate all of him.
    What is done is done, sunrise - sunset and all the rest.

    She still has mascara smears.

    She forgets to bring a new role of toilet paper into the bathroom.
    She has dropped the spoon for the soup on the floor- and picked it up to stir some more.
    When she gets dressed she doesn’t have a pattern as to what goes on first,

    She even burps.

    Don’t think that what he has now is this magical creature, and who knows? He may even still leave her.

    The stack of towels she folds sometimes falls.
    She has left her wallet in car.
    Worn white pants at that time of the month
    She interrupts and when it comes to math is easily stumped.

    She still says yes to cancel
    Forgets to email her friends,
    All of this should make you feel better; I bet she has even spilled coffee on her sweater.
    She still has Mascara Smears.









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