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    dots Submission Name: Impossibledots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 5/118/134
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsImpossibledots
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    We never think that something will happen,
    Until it hits us in the face.
    The impossible is impossible for a reason,
    Or is it?
    I have witnessed the impossible,
    Twice.
    In my 17 years of life.
    The things that were unthinkable,
    Inconceivable,
    Impossible..
    Happened.
    And it happens everyday,
    Even if we don't realize it.
    It truly does,
    I know first hand..
    And I..
    Me who has witnessed the impossible twice now,
    Hopes that it happens again,
    Hopes it finally heals than hurts,
    Hopes that the impossible becomes real once more.
    Will it happen?
    You tell me.
    After all,
    It is supposed to be...
    Impossible..




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