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    dots Submission Name: To define the word "perfect"dots
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    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 113
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I wrote tis long ago,yet it describes all the things that I feel now.


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    dotsTo define the word "perfect"dots
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    You are perfect.
    With your pretty brown eyes,
    and a smile that warms my heart.
    a voice so wonderful and sweet,
    the even the birds envy you.
    the way that you walk,
    so precise and with such grace.

    With a heart so full of grace,
    and a soul so full of joy.
    you have the mind of a genius,
    and the will power of a conqueror.
    you seem to want everything,
    to capture and control all creatures.

    But now this creature has capture you,
    so to define the word perfect
    would be breaking the rules.
    Making no exceptions at all.
    Because that is just what you are,
    just too perfect.




    Submitted on 2013-11-27 22:37:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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