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    dots Submission Name: Forgottendots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
    Total Views: 535
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    dotsForgottendots
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    You see me now,
    Tomorrow you won't.
    Will you miss me?
    For only awhile.
    My death will not be documented,
    No will it be remembered.
    My life was merely a joke,
    So you all will treat my death the same.
    There is a reason I get my strength from my shadow,
    That who I am truly am.
    That's who was supposed to live,
    Instead I stole it's place.
    So forget me,
    Remember them.
    After all..
    Nobodies are always forgotten.




    Submitted on 2013-11-28 16:25:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Zeth you do have people like me who will miss you please don't do this and realize you have a new family that can and will help you.
    | Posted on 2013-11-28 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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