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    dots Submission Name: The Bible In 50 Wordsdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    Description:
       Found this on a church website...it does not belong to me but I enjoyed it and thought others might like it.


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    dotsThe Bible In 50 Wordsdots
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    God made
    Adam bit
    Noah arked
    Abraham split
    Joseph ruled
    Jacob fooled
    Bush talked
    Moses balked
    Pharaoh plagued
    People walked
    Sea divided
    Tablets guided
    Promise landed
    Saul freaked
    David peeked
    Prophets warned
    Jesus born
    God walked
    Love talked
    Anger crucified
    Hope died
    Love rose
    Spirit flamed
    Word spread
    God remained




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      This is so awesome. Lol im not clever enough to have pulled this off
    | Posted on 2014-05-27 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      I am sorry, but this made me giggle a little! and I am not giggling at it, per say, but at how amazing it was. as I read this, I pictured a group of children between the ages of 3-8, standing in front of the church and saying this while doing hand motions, to the flashes of cameras and "ooh-aah"s of their parents/families. a very nice piece, and one I think I will tell my children :)
    | Posted on 2013-12-17 00:00:00 | by gwenn sundala | [ Reply to This ]
      Matthew, Mark, Luke, John
    is the foundation she's built upon

    whisper the wit of a last refrain
    sun, moon, stars, rain...

    Just some thoughts on your thoughts.
    | Posted on 2013-12-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      I just love your stuff. This is definitely amazing. That pretty much sums it up. Of course, the last 4 lines are great. Probably my favorite part. I noticed it rhymes a few times. Was it meant to be that way? I know poems don't have to rhyme, just curious.
    | Posted on 2013-12-04 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]


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