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    dots Submission Name: When I Say I Am A Christiandots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 587
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       by Carol S Wimmer


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    dotsWhen I Say I Am A Christiandots
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    When I say ..."I am a Christian,"
    I'm not shouting "I am saved"
    I'm whispering "I was lost!"
    That is why I chose this way."
    When I say..."I am a Christian,"
    I don't speak of this with pride.
    I’m confessing that I stumble and need someone to be my guide.
    When I say..."I am a Christian,"
    I'm not trying to be strong.
    I’m professing that I'm weak and pray for strength to carry on.
    When I say..."I am a Christian,"
    I'm not bragging of success.
    I'm admitting I have failed and cannot ever pay the debt.
    When I say..."I am a Christian,"
    I'm not claiming to be perfect,
    My flaws are too visible but God believes I'm worth it.
    When I say..."I am a Christian,"
    I still feel the sting of pain.
    I have my share of heartaches which is why I seek His name.
    When I say..."I am a Christian,"
    I do not wish to judge.
    I have no authority I only know I'm loved.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Lady you are great , i love the style
    | Posted on 2013-12-12 00:00:00 | by LAMENTATIONS | [ Reply to This ]
      Pish, then I read the description so props to her I guess. Haha.
    | Posted on 2013-12-09 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]
       I like this. I feel like you could creatively put a font to it and some scene of a beach sunset or something and make a very successful meme. Maybe organize it a bit to reduce the repetitive lines, but they are good reminders of the topic.

    But yeah, very good job!
    | Posted on 2013-12-09 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]


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