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    dots Submission Name: Someone Died Todaydots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 232
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
    Total Views: 579
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       by Ruth Johnson


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    dotsSomeone Died Todaydots
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    Someone died without the Lord
    another soul lost in hell
    one that might in heaven be
    if of our Savior we did tell.
    How many people cross our paths
    each and every day
    did we take that moment
    to share God in a special way?
    Since actions speak as much as words
    and we see those who are lost
    we should always share our savior
    and how He died upon that cross.
    If we will just live our lives
    to honor our sweet Lord
    then others will know God's love
    for our actions and words will show.
    Someone died somewhere today
    someone that we may know
    did we change their destiny
    by Gods love for them we've shown.
    For somone died alone one day
    nailed upon a tree
    and even though it was long ago
    He died for you and me.
    And if we tell each one we meet
    about our Saviors love
    then no one else will die alone
    for the angels which hover above.
    Then when it's time to face our God
    as Hes sitting on the throne
    He can say "well done my child"
    "you've helped lead someone home".




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      I love this one...
    | Posted on 2014-03-13 00:00:00 | by wonderlandgirl | [ Reply to This ]
      This is amazing and beautiful. Many times I have thought of things like this.
    | Posted on 2013-12-03 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]
      As much as I don't agree with the message of the piece, it is very well written!
    | Posted on 2013-11-29 00:00:00 | by MJHausen | [ Reply to This ]


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