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    dots Submission Name: Worth All Thisdots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWorth All Thisdots
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    My back his knifes jabbing out,
    My head is being pounded in,
    And i stand there and ask myself,
    Is it really worth all this?
    My arms ache and burn,
    My legs sting and cut easy,
    And i stand there and ask myself,
    Is it really worth all this?
    My stomach is being attacked,
    My tailbone feels like its trying to grow from my skin,
    And i stand there and ask myself,
    Is it really worth all this?
    My life is falling apart,
    My "real" family doesn't want me,
    And i stand there and ask myself,
    Is it really worth all this?
    Yes..
    As a matter of fact it is.
    Why?
    Cause i know where i belong now,
    With my true family.
    A family that has been made over the years,
    A family that will always love me,
    A family that wants me around,
    And now.
    I want them around too.




    Submitted on 2013-11-28 18:46:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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