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Vanishing Act

Author: TheSnoitart
ASL Info:    19/ M/ USA
Elite Ratio:    3.63 - 53 /64 /52
Words: 93
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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Vanishing Act

Your ontological inertia remains
mindbogglingly irregular.
Generally, when something exists
it has a tendency to keep...

But you seem to disregard that completely
vanishing as you like
confusing my object permanence
like a trans-physical game of

Yet the convenience of your
leads to the incoherence
of my moral persistence

and people treat me like a psycho.
Just because I don't feel quite like you do
doesn't make me crazy.
It just means I don't care.

That's just what happens
when my conscience goes away.

Submitted on 2013-11-28 22:51:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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