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    dots Submission Name: Thankful for Trialsdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThankful for Trialsdots
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    My feelings are hurt, and my heart is torn.
    I have a loss, and no time to mourn.

    No crying from the roof tops, instead I offer praise.
    Thanks be to God, that I have seen better days.

    I recognize the bad, because I once had good
    This simple thing, I haven't always understood.

    I'm thankful for it now, what my heart can see.
    Knowing and trusting that my God is watching me.




    Submitted on 2013-11-29 09:12:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Nice. Reminds me of a song by Laura Story, Blessings. It's a great song. And this was a great write.
    | Posted on 2013-12-10 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]


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