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    dots Submission Name: Decisionsdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Who to trust,
    Who to believe.
    These are the questions..
    They must be answered.
    Go with an expert,
    Or with the one person you trust?
    On one hand..
    One knows first hand,
    But on the other..
    I have known them for just a day.
    The other has never steered me wrong,
    But they haven't been through it.
    Who to trust.
    Who to believe.
    It just may be...
    No it is..
    The hardest of all decisions.
    So i ask you all.
    Which would you choose?

    Submitted on 2013-11-29 20:00:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      One must have faith in themselves. We are born alone, we die alone. Our conception of the infinite leaves us feeling irrelevant so we enjoy corporeal company, if only to simplify the equation. Still, though one can (sort of) impart strength it must well from within. Though we desire such company we must synthetics synthesize of assimilate or become a burden. Now you might say are we not subject to indentured servant sail? Do we not owe each other the similar states of analogous contusion so as to conjunct a collusion. It may be somewhat platonic here on ES, but I tell you truly my friend, of this is a truth that's hard to deny. I wish you strength. Strive to be able to depend on yourself so as to be able to be dependable. There may be betrayals, there may be infidelity, in the end this strength must well from within.

    | Posted on 2013-11-30 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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