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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 5/118/134
    Words: 43
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsYoudots
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    You hate me,
    You save me,
    You break me,
    You help me,
    You burn me,
    You keep me,
    You stab me,
    You patch me,
    You don't want me,
    You can't live without me,
    You kill me,
    You make me,
    Part of your family.




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