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    dots Submission Name: Feed Me Moredots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/132
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsFeed Me Moredots
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    I feel it,
    Flowing through me,
    Coursing through my veins.
    I have finally tasted hatred,
    And i want more.
    I have finally tasted anger,
    And it tastes so sweet.
    More.. Give me more.
    You have brought it to me,
    And i now have the best,
    Best taste in the world.
    But please my comrades,
    Bring me more,
    Bring those who can provide hate,
    Bring those who can keep me angry,
    Oh please..
    Feed me more.





    Submitted on 2013-12-02 17:55:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I can definitely relate to this. Sometimes we want certain feelings to stay. Even though they're not good, we want them for some reason.
    | Posted on 2013-12-02 00:00:00 | by TeslaKoyal | [ Reply to This ]
      As you wish :)
    | Posted on 2013-12-02 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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